Wednesday, September 21, 2011

The Giant Ruby


It was late at night when fearful Fred and Determined Dave were going to an iland a deserted island.

"Look" gasped Fred ship a big pirate ship. It looks like it's going to the iland oh no we can't turn around.

"When we get there we will have to jump" panted Dave, "jump run here comes Evil Elias yelled Fred "what should we do" mumbled Dave. "Hide in a bush" whispered Fred "oh no evil Elias has seen us". "Run into another bush" whispered Fred. "Good he hasn't seen us, he would have simply have gone." "He is going in his boat" said Dave. "now we need to find the treasure." cried Fred. "Oh no, the boat is coming back! Throw stones at it so it will sink" yelled Dave. Dave and Fred each threw ten stones at the boat. But only five hit the boat and slowly Evil Elias's boat sunk, with Evil Elias inside it.

"Now find an X to get the treasure". whispered Dave. "I see one" yelled Fred "Let's dig it up". "It's nothing" muttered Fred. "There is it" they boomed "in the tree!" "Yay but how are we going to get it down?" asked Fred. "I'll climb the tree" said Dave. He started to climb but he fell he kept trying but he kept falling. "I know" said Fred "you can climb up the rope" "Good idea come on." yelled Dave. "I will pull the rope and you can climb." "I got it!" yelled Dave. "ok bring it down" roared Fred. "Ok let's open it up" "WOW look at that ruby it's gigantic!" yelled Fred. "Now how are we going to get it back to the train?" "We will have to carry it" "But it's so heavy" complained Dave. "Then I will bring the train over here" replied Fred.

He walked back to where they had left the train and drove it over to where Dave was. "Now put it on and let's take it home" they both yelled to each other.

By Josh Elliston

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