Tuesday, September 27, 2011

THE MOON CRYSTALS.


At midnight some thing strange came hovering into the open window. They were flying lights coming to Jakes bed. Jake woke up and screamed and screamed finally he calmed down the light whispered to the other light they agreed he was the won. So they took him to there home planet

They told him he needs to do a quest: to take the three moon crystals. First he has to go past the lock monster then dive into the deep blue sea. The loch monster strikes again he swims into a crack in a rock it got dark.

Then he saw a flash of light then he saw land he swam up. Then he saw the moon crystals. But the witch was there she turned around she nearly saw him he ran as fast as he could he got the moon crystals. But the uglily witch saw Jake. Jumped back into the freezing water he swam through the bumpy rocks. It got dark again but for long he got out in a flash. back to the golden shore.

He gave the lights the moon crystals. They took Jake back to planet Earth then to his room about 2 hours later it was breakfast he was so tired but he managed to tell everyone like going to planet Mars.

But they did not believe him.

By Bailey Walklin

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