Sunday, October 2, 2011
The Enormous Adventure
Hamish was trapped in the dark dusty cottage. The magic evil trap door took Hamish at midnight at 12:30 PM when he was fast a sleep to the cottage. But there was still someone that could help.
In the morning Hamish found out that he wasn't in his bedroom. Then suddenly he heard someone talking, who was it? A few minutes later he heard the same voice it said, "hey Hamish do you no know me? I'm evil Ralf I do this so everyone will recognize me, I get famous every week because i've been doing this since I was a kid, my dad taught me." "But how do you no me?" Hamish asked, "how would I know." But my mum will miss me," grumbled Hamish. "I don't care you are going to be stuck in there for ever! Wahahaha! The Evil Ralf replied back. "OK then I will try to unlock you by my self!"Grunted Hamish, but he didn't know how to unlock him. The next day he tried to find some things to unlock the trap door, Hamish found a paper clip, that didn't work, he found a old dusty screw driver that didn't work but it almost worked. It was almost dinner time when...
BANG!!!
Something dropped what was it? He looked back, he finally found out what it was. It was a cellphone He went to go get it,then he looked at it, he said, "cool can use this to ring someone thats close, that lives very close here, he or she can come nd help me get out"! shouted Hamish. "Why did you wake me up and why are you shouting?" Evil Ralf said. "Sorry it wasn't my fault Hamish answered back. After a few minutes, "yay now I can ring someone but I have to ring any random person because I don' know any cellphone numbers." So Hamish dialed a number, someone answered the cellphone excuse me what is your name?" whispered Hamish. My name is Nice Henry, what do you want and what is your name?" Answered Henry. "My name is Hamish and I am stuck in this cottage, this trap door has trapped me, could you come and help me get out while he is a sleep, and where do you live?"Hamish whispered back. Henry said, "I live in a cottage, what cottage are you in?" "I am in a cottage with a evil trap door and he is red with black lines," whispered Hamish, "same! I live on the other side of the evil trap door!"Shouted Henry "So could you come strait away and get rid of that evil trap door. OK" Whispered Hamish, "OK," Henry answered back.
Henry knocked at the trap door, KNOCK, KNOCK, "wake up!" "Stop it! Stop it! Stop knocking at me!" Shouted Evil Ralf. "But I need to tell you something amazing, I saw a awesome racing car, it was black, white and red, there your favorite colours aren't they. They were in Toy World, you should buy one, and could you buy one for me as well? I could guard him while you go get them, OK," boomed Henry. "OK, i'll go right now," Evil Ralf mumbled. So off he went, after he went they quickly rushed out to the open. They were so happy to be with the fresh air. So they roller skated back to Hamish's house safely. When they got there they sprinted to the living room were there mum was crying because she missed Hamish so much. She shouted, "where did you come from, and why were you away for so long?" "Well it was a very long story and I bought him back with me, he is a magic roller skate and can we adopt him?" Panted Hamish. "Sure we can!" Boomed Hamish's mum, and they lived happily ever after.
By SolaTsuruta
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