Sunday, October 2, 2011

I need somewhere to stay!!!


Once upon a time there lived three lonely people who needed some where to stay,their names were Boy Sam, Princess Amy & that little mean Evil Andy, well Evil Andy wasn't looking for a house he had a castle, he was trying to kill them.

Princess Amy and Boy Sam went to look for some where to stay in the Islands. Come on Sammy wake up we've got to sail the seven seas in three days,come on pull up your pants weave got to sail our R.M.S 19.12 were leaving at 9:00 when they got to the sea,the sea was relaxed and weave yelled Boy Sam "look the sea is beautiful & beautiful is going to be the ride of my dreams.

When they got in the boat and on the water they started to look for some island to stay on for the night they rowed for a while but suddenly... scrape! What was that, "screamed Princess Amy" i think we are stranded here. But wait we are on land,"oh hooray", Lets beautiful jumped out of the boat & ran, but before they could run any further the bush shook, medianly they stopped suddenly the world fell silent. I'll see what is behind the bush suddenly... wham, whoosh scrape, bang. Out of no where rahhhhh Andy ran and jumped on Princess Amy & shoved her in a enormous bag and ran away with the bag.

"Princess Amy!!!!" Screamed Boy Sam, I'll get ya one day said Boy sam screaming & yelling after Evil Andy. At midnight Boy Sam was still awake,he was thinking about Princess Amy of course, but at the same time he was thinking was Evil Andy trying to hurt Princess amy or trying to have some fun. In the morning at 6:00 Boy Sam went into the incarnating castle to see what is inside. He saw a jail, inside the jail was princess Amy. "Princess Amy are you alright?!" "Yes, how do you get out of here? It's hard and rocky." "I think it's that rock over there" said Boy Sam. "Put it in the holder over there!" cried Amy. "Okay" said Boy Sam. CRASH "I'm out now" "where is that evil Andy?" asked Boy Sam" "look he's on the stairs shouted Princess Amy" BANG "what was that? whispered Princess Amy. I shot him in the heart he's dead,so now we can lock Evil Andy in the jail, yeah ready 1,2,3 lift RRRRRRR went the jail door as it shut. Now one more thing to do...

Will you marry me said Boy Sam as he got down on his knees.Yes i will! And they lived happily ever after living in a tent.

By Izaak Dunlop

2 comments:

  1. good work that's a very good story.

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  2. I love it Izaak, Fascinating!

    From Lucy,Rebecca and Zak.

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