Tuesday, October 4, 2011
The Magical Rock.
After Lu Lu had finished her dinner she went outside and got something secret. she had been keeping these secret rocks for a very long time,but now she is going to show her older brother James about the rocks. She told him everything. "James come out after you have finished your dinner I want to show you something amazing." It was a dark Saturday night so James purred "can't I see inside?" "Sure" Lulu said. So they went inside and Lulu showed James the rocks. "So there just a couple of rocks" James yelled. "No! They're magical rocks" "Yeah right" "It's true it's true". Suddenly the rocks began to glow.
The next day Jame and Lulu went up to the attic and looked at the rocks again. This time the rocks lit up and a portal opened. Lulu and James walked through and found a magical world. "This looks like the further" James mumbled looking more shocked then ever. "Yeah, there's flying cars and everything" Lulu agreed. Suddenly the portal closed.
They walked to a man while still carrying the rock. "Hi there, we are new here we came from a portal" Lulu told the man. "What! You came from the upper world" "I don't understand our world is just a world it isn't the upper world" "oh yes it is" the man boomed. "So this must be the under world awesome" James said. "We need somewhere to stay can we stay with you" Lulu asked. "Sure." So they drove in the mans car and went to his house. It was a very nice house.
The next day Lulu and James said good bye to the man and off they went.
They soon came across a really tall building They walked inside the building It smelt really yuk. "This gives me the creeps Lulu whispered cuddling into James. "It gives me the creeps too" James whispered back.
They soon came across some guards. They yelled "if no pass pass then no go go." "What." "No pass pass then no go go." So they went to a man and James roared "watch and learn" and then he bet up the man. Then they got the mans pass-port. They went to the guards again. "We thought we tolled you if no pass pass then no go go." "And we have a pass-port" James corrected the guards. "This pass says Mr Gob" "Ahhhhh he's our father."
They went into a dark room at the end of the room there was some lights and a chair. At the chair there was a man so Lulu and James hid behind a shelf. But it wasn't a shelf it was the man's giant dog. The man turn around he had an evil look on his face. By now Lulu and James knew that the man was evil.
But Lulu and James had a bigger problem. The giant dog chased them into a corner.
"What do we have here?" The evil man hissed. "How are you?" James hissed back. "I am the evil spelling master ha ha ha." "The evil spelling master? This place is really weird!"
"What are they?" the evil spelling master mumbled pointing to the rock. "They are rocks" Lulu snapped. The evil spelling master took the rocks and got the dogs to take Lulu and James outside his room. Then he got the guards to take them outside of the building.
"How are we ever going to get the rocks back?" Lulu said. "I know how but it might be dangerous." James answered. "How how?" "What we need is a harness and a rope. We need to go through the buildings vent one of us need to put the harness on and one of us needs to hold the rope. I'll hold the rope because I'm the strongest." "Lets get some rest it's really dark" Lulu suggested.
Out of nowhere the man who had looked after them another times came "you need somewhere to stay? Just ask me." So they went to his house.
The next day Lulu and James got a harness and some rope from the man and went to the building.
"There's the vent." James yelled. "Quick. I'll life you up then you pull me up." So Lulu did what she was told.
They crawled through the vent. They could hear the evil spelling master. They followed his voice. They found the vent that went to the evil spelling masters room. James lowered Lulu down Be careful James whimpered to Lulu. Suddenly the evil spelling master turned around. Lulu had the rock in her hand. "Pull me up!" Lulu yelled. So James did what he was told.
Lulu and James crawled out of the vent. They quickly threw the rock in the air hoping the portal will open. It did and they walk through. By the time the evil spelling master got outside the portal was still open. He jumped in the air but it just closed.
James and Lulu went to there mum and dad and told them everything. But of course they didn't believe them.
By Jamie Wilson
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Very Good Jamie!
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